NaPoWriMo Day 2: Water of Life

April 2nd, 2010 - Comments (4)

Scarlet missives from my heart
whisper of liquid inhalation,
washing hot over thirsty cells,
and pounding through tunnels of flesh.

Posted at 6:35 pm in Poetry

4 Comments So Far

1. Vinnie Kinsella wrote:

Great job, Clint! I really like the second line.

2. John Rochester wrote:

And then you went pee..

3. Clint wrote:

Uh, thanks for that, John. :)

4. Lisa Walker Williams wrote:

Lub-dub, Lub-dub….

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